By Plucking Her Petals (Story) permalink
Descriptions
| Date | User | |||
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| 29.03.2011 21:17 | malte@skipforward.net |  |
Protagonist is a kind of broker of beauty - he can take it and give it to living beings. A beautiful women sells him all her beauty. The broker is then caught up between her, an artist who is occasional customer of the broker, and a girl who is the artist's not-quite-voluntary work. |
Reviews
| Date | User | |||
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| 21.02.2012 10:18 | gunnar@skipforward.net |  |
Beauty can be alchemically extracted and bought and sold. The story is fine - but not amazing. | |
| 29.03.2011 21:17 | malte@skipforward.net |  |
Starts off fine but didn't work very well for me later. Motivations of the people are not explained really which is especially bad concerning the woman. |