| 27.11.2013 21:17 |
gunnar@skipforward.net |
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a random fragment of a story does not a short-story make |
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| 17.11.2013 13:32 |
emily@skipforward.net |
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The abstract manner the story is written made it hard to like for me. It felt surprisingly devoid of emotion despite the story but it was an ok storyline. |
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| 10.11.2013 10:27 |
matthias@skipforward.net |
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Story about familiy/society problems and conflicts, filled with anger and much sadness. May work in a larger context, but not on its own. |
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| 02.11.2013 16:50 |
sven@skipforward.net |
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Something new under the sun. A mother bears a child ("a mind") "into" a ship, or better, to become the soul of that ship. The story around that interesting idea is a bit annoying as it is OVERloaded with hatred stories about the ship's brother. The point is to discuss pro and cons about traditional hibernation space traveling versus the told new way. Also a bit different is the story telling being in form of a mother telling his son (the ship's brother) the whole story. |
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| 02.11.2013 10:17 |
doris@skipforward.net |
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Intresting idea, but the story is a little bit too long for me. |
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| 07.10.2013 18:28 |
diemut@skipforward.net |
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I don´t like stories about giving birth to monsters |
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| 04.10.2013 22:00 |
andrea@skipforward.net |
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Not too bad setting but storywise a little thin. |
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| 02.10.2013 09:12 |
baumann@skipforward.net |
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Dont get it AT ALL! Strange topic,etc. |
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| 01.10.2013 18:39 |
heiko@skipforward.net |
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did not work for me, maybe because of the family issues in here |
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| 02.01.2013 15:30 |
malte@skipforward.net |
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Didn't work very well for me. Too much angst, too much drama, too little actual story. |
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