| 03.11.2013 13:04 |
matthias@skipforward.net |
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Promising beginning, but misses its potential and turns out to be a lovestory in the disguise of a science fiction story. |
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| 30.10.2013 22:25 |
emily@skipforward.net |
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Enjoyable reading, but would have been more appealing if it was either a story about gods or squid people rather than both. But squid people love sound cute. |
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| 23.10.2013 21:47 |
sven@skipforward.net |
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Interesting switch of perspectives: ocean creatures go to research the dry land. This is the cool part. The more boring part is the legend stuff in the middle. It would be a better story this god legend stuff. The sad ending doesn't make it better for me :-( |
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| 07.10.2013 15:56 |
diemut@skipforward.net |
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none |
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| 04.10.2013 21:23 |
doris@skipforward.net |
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Nice idea but there is something missing to make it really interesting. |
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| 03.10.2013 18:51 |
heiko@skipforward.net |
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interesting viewpoint of race development from aquatic life forms. That was most interesting, the rest was not really interesting for me. |
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| 03.10.2013 16:00 |
andrea@skipforward.net |
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Two sad love stories in one. A bit of a mellow ending. But nice. |
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| 01.10.2013 16:15 |
baumann@skipforward.net |
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Hmmh aquatics and their sea god, straightforward but I dont get some new points. |
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| 30.09.2013 17:29 |
malte@skipforward.net |
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Nice and sad. A bit weirdly told: Somehow it manages to be both somewhat poetic/romantic and very straightforward. |
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| 23.09.2013 22:03 |
gunnar@skipforward.net |
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it's perfectly fine, but sort of empty |
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